Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Novel Outline

Ahmonique Evans                                                       FDA /603
                                  
                                    Novel outline
Introduction
 a.Introducing Alica Roberts [the most important character],Ms.Miles[Alica  mommy],and Milly[Alica Best friend].
b.The book  mostly take place in New York.
c.Alica always live in New york growing up with a cool mother but a horrible father . Alica and her  mom goes to England for Alica birthday .
Rising Action
a.Alicia is the  main character who goes to England
with her best friend for their birthday  gift from there moms.
b.Alicia does not want to live in England  because 
her mother fell in love with  a Royal Payne and is getting married.Alicia wants  to live in New York  because she does not think she can be the princess of England.Alicia mom said if   she wants to live in New York, she has to stay with her father but her mom wants to not marry someone who Alicia does not like.

Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Novel Picth

                                   My Novel Pitch             
My Novel is titled ''New York Princess''. The book is about  a fourteen year old girl name Alicia. Alicia is a teen with a great voice and has a love for any type of music. She is a normal teen but, she has a little drama in her life. Alicia lives with her mother who is a doctor  and is a very cool mother.Alicia's dad is not around much and is a cop.Alicia's mother and father are not together. Alicia does not like her dad because of the way he treats her mom. Alicia  has only one big brother. In this book, Alicia shares her unreal  jorney from New York to England. 

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Non-Fiction #3

                                                    Question #5

     A anecdote i can think about is about taking responsiblity for yor own action.For example my class in third grade was loud so taking responsibltiy for my action I stand quick and the teacher  take me and my friend susan out to get free pizza and ice cream.The point is you are responsible for your own actions.

NON -FICTION # 2

                                            QUESTION #3 WRITTERS RESPONSE

I think the writter had a good response to introduce orangatians before Galdikas.I think  the writter was trying to let us know about the subject before writting the autobiograghy about Galdikas.The writter was using organization in the article about the orangatians andthe author really wanted to useorder of importance.

Tuesday, February 2, 2010

The amazing Orangutans Non-fiction # 1

                                                     
         QUESTION 4 READERS RESPONSE
  I think Galdikas is movtivated by  moved than a scentific curiosity about orangutans.''Galdikas and her assistants foster parents for as long as eight years''.Galdikas really loves the oangutans beccause she ''get plently snuggly'.Galdikas is a loving person more then a scenctic.

Sunday, December 20, 2009

Reading Response HOMEWORK #63 (The second)

In Everything is fine I read ''Agnes''.Agnes called and Mazzy answered.Aunt Agnes wanted to talk to her mother but her mom can't talk so she just breathed.Aunt Agnes thought Mazzy's mom was mad at her.I think Aunt Agnes thinks she is a wonderful sister but she is just a okay sister because he just calls every three weeks.

I think Mazzy does not like Agnes.I think so because she hanged up the phone on her.Also, Aunt Agnes ask Mazzy about her father and she know about her father living.What type of aunt is that she can just stay out of there lives.

Reading Response Homework #63

The chapter I read today is MOM'S SISTER in Everything is Fine.Mazzy's aunt is forty-six and her mother is thirty-six.Mazzy's aunt name is Agnes and she has five kids.Agnes lives in kansas.After becoming a artist, Mazzy's mom was name Roxie but she change it to Luella.Then,Mazzy's mom move to Utah and she has one kid (Mazzy).

I think Mazzy is sad.I think she is sad because everything was going good until her father left.She said Quote she was a artist and she move to Utah.After all she been throw,I feel sad for Mazzy and her mom.